Sunday, March 31, 2013

SPRING


The Sunday Scribblings prompt is "seasoned".
SPRING

Spring flutters in, fabulous flirt,
And flicks the last snows from her skirt.
Released from storms' prison,
Our garden hopes risen,
We neighbors are sharing the dirt.

I wrote this this week for Mad Kane's Limerick off.

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9 comments:

George S Batty said...

love it...I've tried the Mad's Limericks a few times and not done so well.
I Like the whole thing but was particularly fond of your 1st two lines. Nice limericking...

March 31, 2013 at 8:22 PM
Madeleine Begun Kane said...

And it earned you an Honorable Mention too. Great job! And thanks!

Limerick of the Week 107

April 1, 2013 at 12:06 AM
Old Egg said...

Limericks are a lot of fun especially when the reader is not quite sure the pun in the last line was intentional or not. But I laughed!

April 1, 2013 at 2:35 AM
Altonian said...

I'm a great fan of limericks and their writers, and this one is very fine. Congratulations on your Honourable Mention.

April 1, 2013 at 5:30 AM
Jae Rose said...

Spring sounds feisty..as she should be..full of life and verve..

April 2, 2013 at 2:07 AM
Keith's Ramblings said...

Your springs sounds far more interesting than ours! Delightful.

April 2, 2013 at 4:44 AM
Belva Rae Staples said...

I love this lively little limerick!

April 6, 2013 at 12:23 PM
Amber said...

Vibrant and charming limerick =)

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April 7, 2013 at 8:53 AM
Beth Camp said...

Good to see your poems again. I do like that wonderful first line, especially as spring has finally arrived here in eastern Washington! Hope you are well. Beth

April 25, 2013 at 6:47 AM

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